by Sweet escape
Submission date : 2008-04-02
Michael D Nalley ( F P C D )
This poem of course reflects much disappointment. Though I cannot recall it ever happen to me I can imagine the anger that may follow. That was reflected by your ending, I believe
I missed a birthday for a different reason
I like the emotion of this one. tell me what you think of my writings too, i too think the best writings are about real things
Bassel Samman ( F P C D )
Lol, I was never one for birthdays when it comes to my own, and I'm so forgetful, but that's why I ask everybody to remind me of other birthdays including my own. My mom is in charge of my sisters and brothers. My brothers and sisters remind me of mom's and dad's birthday and their own spouses and children. The only birthdays I never forget is my wife's, my mother-in-laws and my kids. I'm forgetful, but I rather enjoy life occasionally and would not want to make a mistake that can so easily cost me my life. Great read, and helps really push to not ever make such a mistake because I can see how it can really hurt.
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_this is really sad. Well, belated happy b-day. I enjoyed reading it and i really feel the emotions.. Good work!