Submission date : 2010-12-15
Last edit : 2010-12-16
Hannah Lizette ( F P C D )
A sad yet peaceful poem, i think. it gives my heart some peace because sometimes you just want to cry and dwell on the past and just want them here... but really you should be happy for them and just cherish the memories you got to spend with them... they are in such a better place than we are and one day we will see them again. 5/5
Infinite Catastrophe aka Alisha ( F P C D )
Exactly ^^ thanks for reading. (:
DeviousCharmer ( F P C )
Really pretty :)
Baby Rainbow ( F P C D )
Again, this is very moving and I related to it a lot, there are so many angels up there who became angels too soon, but then I believe there is a reason for such things and do my best to hold onto this idea and hope one day I will know the answers.
Nice flow and nice tribute to a lost loved one. Well done.
Joker Queen ( F P C D )
It's beautiful the rhyme scheme and the message convened in this piece I think I should print it and put if on my wall since I lost the one I loved a year ago so I haven't been able to smile in a long time that reaches my eyes but thanks for posting this lovely poem Alisha 5/5