Anyone listening

Its not something most teens dont feel expecially after an abusive life

Nicely written, very tight with a good rhyming scheme.

I like how this poem conjures images as you read and I especially enjoy how this can be read at only lightning pace.

great job.

Nice poem, I love the fact that it was short and straight to the point.

This poem seems so simple when you first look at it, then you get to reading it, and suddenly, there is a much deeper meaning. This is a really good poem! Keep writing!

I absolutely adore this. This is great! You took my pointers and it bloody well worked out! I love it. It's smooth, it flows and I love the repetition of the pale blue light - it really sets the scene.

A nice, sweet poem; good job :)