Deep

by Misundertood   Apr 4, 2014


Deep, dark
low, down
these are things
you feel now

things seep
things go deep
life is a wrath
that's ready to reap

come and go
you'll never know
the pain that flows
beneth my soul

life is a flow
and i can't go
things happen
and you know

Deep, dark
low ,down
here i am
in the ground

come say bye
here i die
life is gone
i see the dawn

I am no loner
life's little pawn
here i come
worse off than some

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  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Oh this poem is really sad.....
    I could feel the sadness and pain in the entire poem.... Each and every line...

    Life sometimes does get in the way and makes our living a misery.... It's the sad truth that we can do nothing about.....

    I love you last line when you say your are no loner...

    A nice write... Keep penning.

  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Oh this poem is really sad.....
    I could feel the sadness and pain in the entire poem.... Each and every line...

    Life sometimes does get in the way and makes our living a misery.... It's the sad truth that we can do nothing about.....

    I love you last line when you say your are no loner...

    A nice write... Keep penning.

  • 9 years ago

    by Jinseiwakurai

    It is wonderful!

  • 10 years ago

    by Thandie

    So sad..well written

  • 10 years ago

    by Trinity Heart

    I love the flow and they rhyme beutiful and sad good job.

    -Onyx

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