Another Attempt

by Christina   Dec 15, 2014


My body's cold
Yet I wear warm clothes
And the music in my ears
Helps with the tears
And the people who once cared
All have left
Up in this tree
It's only me
With a bottle of pills
And a rope
Which will I choose?
Or will it choose me?
It seems the demons
Have been following
For years on end
Are they searching for me?
Do they even care?
If I where to die
On this very tree
Will the demons spread
More vigorously?
To others who may care
Those few who do
I don't want to hurt them
Although I try to

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  • 9 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    For a very newly recent member I'm amazed by your talent! I love the poem and the way it flowed and seemed to rhyme throughout the poem and never once did it feel forced. What I didn't like was the fact that it didn't have commas, and it wasn't made into stanzas which would've helped to make it even more beautiful, regardless of those little things it's stunning and I hope this was to get off your chest because I want to read more of your poetry! 5/5

    -Mori

    • 9 years ago

      by Christina

      Thank you so much! I'm sorry you didn't like how I didn't use commas or stanzas however I did this on purpose. At the time when I thought of this it was going to be in place of my suicide letter (though I obviously survived). As I was writing this it seemed as if all my thoughts were jumbled and bleeding into one another. I tried to create this same effect in the poem.

    • 9 years ago

      by Christina

      Thank you so much! I'm sorry you didn't like how I didn't use commas or stanzas however I did this on purpose. At the time when I thought of this it was going to be in place of my suicide letter (though I obviously survived). As I was writing this it seemed as if all my thoughts were jumbled and bleeding into one another. I tried to create this same effect in the poem.

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