Submission date : 2005-07-10
Lauren ( F P C )
*gives another rib cracking hug* awww its so sad when people we love and trust turn there backs on us, but you have to realize there not really worth your time :-)
Love Loz xoxoxox
BJ ( F P C D )
hey i like this poem alot it is true and very deep it's about sothing real your not just a writer who writes about depression you write about real things real problems and i know what your going through...great job perfect 5/5 love
>torn apart ( F P C D )
really good. i know exacty how you feel. this one girl was my best friend, my world at that time and then she just fked me over so many times...it hurts so bad i know. hope ur ok, and keep up the writing.
take care x x x
ps: i was thinkin in the first stanza bit mayb u could do without (!). just it makes more uplifting, when it isnt what you're tryin to get accross...just maybe!?