Lonely Rain

by LadyPearl

Pouring down endless rain
I stand alone in this world
hiding away my secret pain
Hiding away unspoken words

just a image through the eyes
Tears inside never cried
Alone in the rain, staring down
thinking silently, without a sound

under this hood lay the real me
a darkness no one else can see
face brightened by an innocent smile
loneliness come just in a while

An angel lost to unknown burdens
not realizing the old word "fun"
Only recognizing this emptiness inside
Emotions, confusions unable to hide

Withered till my soul grows cold
nothing happy left to hold
living a life, no longer with care
this loneliness will always be here

 

Submission date : 2005-09-28

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KaKaKatlynn ( F P C D ) at 2005-10-01

Amazing job once again. I really like this poem also. Meaning from it i got is no matter what the heck you do no matter where you go you always will have that piece of you being sad for the rest of your life. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

◊ Atomic ◊ ( F C D ) at 2005-10-06

Oi! I like how it rhymes every other line.

"just a image through the eyes
Tears inside never cried
Alone in the rain, staring down
thinking silently, without a sound"

I like the whole outside-in-the-rain scene.

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(")-(") Arrivedceri!

Jason Meres ( F C D ) at 2005-10-07

"Only recognizing this emptiness inside
Emotions, confusions unable to hide"

Love that line. and youw word choices here.