Submission date : 2005-09-28
KaKaKatlynn ( F P C D )
Amazing job once again. I really like this poem also. Meaning from it i got is no matter what the heck you do no matter where you go you always will have that piece of you being sad for the rest of your life. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.
◊ Atomic ◊ ( F C D )
Oi! I like how it rhymes every other line.
"just a image through the eyes
Tears inside never cried
Alone in the rain, staring down
thinking silently, without a sound"
I like the whole outside-in-the-rain scene.
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Jason Meres ( F C D )
"Only recognizing this emptiness inside
Emotions, confusions unable to hide"
Love that line. and youw word choices here.