Spring break

by Independence Forever

A time to rejuice your batteries
eat alot and clog up the arteries

celebrate with a little for a change
now you are out of school work's range

rejoice, you have a week to rest
you can now sleep at your best

but don't get lazy, do a little hard work now
show everyone that you still know how

have some fun in the soft soothing sun
you'll be sad when the week is done

but till then be happy, never despair again
remember schoolwork to you is foreign

i wish you the happiest of spring breaks
have some fun, no matter what it takes

 

Submission date : 2007-03-30

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angelbabygirl at 2007-04-04

Wonderful! My spring break ended two weeks ago and i wish i was still on it. B/c i hate school and the teachers.

amber ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-17

Its good. maybe add more. but otherwise its good.

Kaila ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-21

I loved this!! This was so creative in it's own way! You did an absolutly amazing job nice one!!

20sMiLe07 ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-26

I liked the way it was full of energy and happiness. It encouraged the idea of living for today and i like that. good job

xxx alex xxx

Amanda ( P ) at 2007-05-04

O0o0o I like this poem...Can't wait for the summer time :)
Beautifully written. Def. 5/5!
-Amanda



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