The Open Challenge - Come in Adventurers

  • Sunshine
    6 years ago, updated 6 years ago

    This is not a contest; no winners, no judges, only minds' sqeezing.

    Anyone in for an open challenge? So whoever takes the following challenge should post that they snatched the title instantly to avoid duplicates. The first to post that they want the challenge ( if anyone :P ) is the one eligible to take the turn.

    When done, post your poem and then set your own challenge for the next poet to snatch it.

    Choose a title, a challenge, a genre, whatever you want, make it easy/hard, it's all up to you, but make it appealing and interesting.

    There is only 1 condition, no poem shall exceed 15 lines, users can make their own condition regarding line/word count but no poem should be more than 15 lines.

    Make them quick reads, nice and creative! Challenge yourself!

  • Sunshine
    6 years ago, updated 6 years ago

    Challenge # 1

    Title: Lemons and Brown Sugar

    - 12 lines
    - it should be a sad poem/sad feelings/be hopeless <3
    - use the following words: black, wound, fruits
    -free verse*

  • Poet on the Piano replied to Sunshine
    6 years ago

    Neat challenge, Rania! This should be fun. I also like how you call it "mind squeezing" :)

    Lemons and Brown Sugar.

    I've watched the wound grow on your heart,
    depression- an angry black spot you can't rub off.
    We used to pick the shiniest fruits at the market,
    inventing new names for how they made us feel.
    But soon, you stopped drinking sunshine
    and instead used shovels to find your food.

    Now, your hands are always caked with dirt,
    worms crawling inside your mouth as you frown,
    turning from the sun that softly raised you.
    You bury the produce Mother Earth gifts us,
    locking away light, entombing any ripe emotion.
    And what else can I do but watch you wither...

    __________________________

    Challenge #2:

    Title: Without breaking the yolk

    - 10 lines
    - must use these words: dawn, bed, cracked
    - cannot use the word "egg"
    - free verse

  • Sunshine replied to Poet on the Piano
    6 years ago

    Mary Anne! You should thank me for pushing you to write such an amazing poem lol very well done !!

  • Ben Pickard replied to Sunshine
    6 years ago, updated 6 years ago

    If you, anyone of you, believe it easy
    for a man like me to shed his bedclothes
    and face the dawn with purity and strength,
    then you are mistaken.
    I try so hard to enter the cave - snatch the dragon's loot -
    and retreat without notice. Often, I am able...
    but lacerated veins leak claret thick as yolk
    and I am emptied of all the good - all the hope and goodwill
    that I tried so hard to shower those around me with.
    I am frail and I fail; cracked, inside and out - and I am sorry.

    challenge 3

    -Title - Into the Fire
    -lines - 8
    -rhyming couplets

  • Sunshine replied to Ben Pickard
    6 years ago, updated 6 years ago

    Into the Fire

    The sky smothers me with showers of cold
    but I grin as though, I am soaked in gold

    Shall rain choke me, shall it reach my soul
    I fear not anguish, I fear nothing at all.

    Let ice crawl to the core of every bone
    I'm bold like iron, and hard like stone

    I'm numb & cold threatens not my empire,
    let more rain fall, I'll plunge it into fire.

    ********

    Challenge # 4

    Title: Bitter Pie

    - free verse
    - 6 lines
    - use: chocolate, white sugar, divorce

  • Everlasting replied to Sunshine
    6 years ago, updated 6 years ago

    Title: Bitter Pie

    Lady,
    Before him, you were unsweetened chocolate.
    Later, he added white sugar into your life
    but your bitterness was too strong;
    The pie, you, both, cooked, turned bitter.

    Divorce was the best taste you both had, right?

    ******

    Challenge #5

    Title: Hummingbird

    - Rondeau

  • Hellon replied to Everlasting
    6 years ago

    Hummingbird (Rondeau)

    In yonder meadow flowers bloom
    cascading colours and sweet perfume
    it's where the hummingbird doth play
    amidst the marigolds of May
    and swaying yellow spanish broom.

    This tiny bird of colourful plume
    while gathering nectar I assume
    will stay and while the summer away
    in yonder meadow.

    When summer ends and winter glooms
    hummingbird I now assume
    will fly away without delay
    to once again return in May
    when spring arrives and summer looms
    in yonder meadow.

    Challenge #6

    A Limerick...you choose he title

  • Larry Chamberlin replied to Hellon
    6 years ago, updated 6 years ago

    Limerick
    Hell On Wheels

    The lassie from Scotland ran away
    ‘twas said ‘cause she had gone astray
    but the Aussies don’t care
    she has such a flare
    and the wine pours free every day

    Challenge # 7

    Syntuit [http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/articles/684]

  • Hellon replied to Larry Chamberlin
    6 years ago

    Ha ha Larry...I love it! First time I've had a limerick written about me :)

  • Acoustic Odyssey
    6 years ago

    To Taste a Strawberry
    Syntuit

    Why are strawberries
    at their peak deliciousness
    when they are dying

    Uhh, I think I did that right..

    Challenge #8
    Shape Poetry, can not use any circular shapes.

  • Em (marmite) replied to Acoustic Odyssey
    6 years ago, updated 6 years ago

    OK here goes a little difficult as I cannot centre the piece but hey ho...

    I
    a volcano
    have waited to erupt
    for some hundred years
    now I have decided to take a bow
    after giving my record breaking show
    and my goodness wasn't I extraordinary
    for I took no prisoners - life's always at stake

    Challenge #9 write a rhyming acrostic poem about beauty (the word cannot be beauty though)

  • Maple Tree
    6 years ago, updated 6 years ago

    Aching souls scatter
    Nearby alleys clatter
    Gutter ways cry
    Endless hearts die
    Labled streets smother
    Indexed as sister, brother
    City of angels, hover and recover.

    Challenge #10
    Title : Scattered Seedlings
    In haiku form

  • Mr. Darcy replied to Maple Tree
    6 years ago, updated 6 years ago

    cascading seeds spin
    through the cooling air, resting
    on last years scorched earth

    Challenge #11
    Title: Troubled waters

    English Sonnet NB. if this is too daunting - try this:

    http://www.express.co.uk/life-style/top10facts/621378/10-things-FIBONACCI

    1. The Fibonacci sequence, named after a medieval Italian mathematician, begins 1,1,2,3,5,8? with each number equal to the sum of the previous two. 2. Fibonacci was the name given to Leonardo Pisano who was born in 1175 and died around 1250

  • Poet on the Piano replied to Mr. Darcy
    6 years ago

    Troubled Waters

    Why
    do
    we say
    "keep swimming"
    when words are anchors
    and we can't seem to part the sea.

    _______________________

    Challenge #12:

    A 4 line poem on your favorite way to enter a room.

  • Maple Tree replied to Poet on the Piano
    6 years ago

    Silouetted tip toes hush
    Crossed a threshold of invitation,
    Hips sway as sparkles ignite a smile
    Swan gliding, as laughter begins; she trips.

    #13 challenge
    3 line poem about dust bunnies

  • Mr. Darcy
    6 years ago, updated 6 years ago

    Sunbeams warm a fairy's gift, that
    waltzes on a wisp, lifting it - up, up, up:
    a random, woven parcel of, dusty cat fur.

    #14 challenge

    Title: 'Oh, to be young again'

    Edit: rhyming couplets

  • Lost One replied to Mr. Darcy
    6 years ago, updated 6 years ago

    Oh, to be Young Again

    To play with friends till street lights come on
    Run home racing the setting sun

    Sleepovers where we would seldom sleep
    All around the house we'd creep

    Stolen glances in the halls
    Soft kisses and late night calls

    Waiting for my woman in white
    She walks down the aisle, a lovely sight

    Take them to their first day of school
    Listen as they debate what's cool

    Watch as the cycle of life repeats
    With you in my arms, a lovely treat

    And when I find it hard to stand
    Lying in bed, you holding my hand

    You'll remind me of love, we'll reminisce
    And you'll lay me to rest with a tender kiss

    Oh... to be young again

    #15

    Title: I Can't

    Quatrains

  • Ben Pickard
    6 years ago

    May I just say what a fabulous thread this is, Rania. Well done.

  • Sunshine replied to Ben Pickard
    6 years ago

    Fabulous poets & poetryy <3

  • Acoustic Odyssey
    6 years ago, updated 6 years ago

    I Can't

    One more month, then it'll be a year
    but yesterday you were just here
    Strength woven behind a tired gaze
    a smile overshadowed concluding days

    Then endless tears fell upon cold hands
    when God enacted his final plans
    An angel ascended to golden thrones
    a naive child left...to mourn alone

    Now, late "I love yous" plastered upon stone
    regretting days when love wasn't shown
    I can't believe she's left me here
    and in just one month, it'll be a year

    Challenge # 16
    Senryu Chain
    Title: Hope

  • Mr. Darcy replied to Acoustic Odyssey
    6 years ago, updated 6 years ago

    Hope (Senyru string)

    if there should be one
    single place within us, let
    that light, shine so bright

    if there should be one
    single burst of truth, let see
    that star, shine so bright

    if there should be one
    ray of hope - a new born's smile:
    hold that love - tonight

    Challenge # 17

    Acrostic

    Title: Spring is everywhere or Spring has sprung

  • Larry Chamberlin replied to Mr. Darcy
    6 years ago

    Spring has sprung

    Seems every tree has decided to attack;
    pollen drifts like yellow powder grenades
    ready to blow up my sinuses and leave
    incendiary raw flesh down my throat;
    no prisoners taken in the annual fight
    gathering only survivors gasping to live.

    how can trees be seen as such peaceful
    agents of nature when they are so cruel
    sacrificing us all to their prurient pursuits.

    scorn those who blithely wax poetic
    preening in flowers gracing their hair
    rail against the injustice of torture
    ulcerated wounds from allergy pustules
    nauseate me all this season long
    growing pains indeed, their growth my pain.

    Challenge # 18 Tanka

    “Crossing the Bridge to You”

  • Poet on the Piano replied to Larry Chamberlin
    6 years ago

    "Crossing the Bridge to You"

    Cherry blossoms play
    as you try to chase the sun
    but love blinds the lost.
    We can never meet again;
    doomed, stuck between horizons.

    ____________________

    Challenge #19 A diary/journal entry to your favorite song

  • Em (marmite) replied to Poet on the Piano
    6 years ago

    Dear diary
    I met this boy today -
    his smile to die for
    his love I pine for

    but
    he didn't notice me
    wanted that cheeerleader

    she wanted him too

    I guess the winner takes it all
    (I know it's rubbish)

    Challenge #20 free verse, title - a long way from home.. Use words- children, mortgage, house, free, control and secure

  • Poet on the Piano replied to Em (marmite)
    6 years ago, updated 6 years ago

    A Long Way Home

    I mourn for you,
    for the children often
    roaming without direction,
    for the graves you must dig
    when everyone else says
    "now they are set free"
    like it's instant consolation,
    when it's really just another
    hashtag of "justice for ______"

    A house torn between racial wars
    as you have to raise your child
    before you pay your mortgage,
    before you can go back to school.
    Day to day life is never secure;
    I watch while students
    call your children names,
    administration dismissing you
    for being too sensitive.
    Your children question
    their identity, not even sure
    where they can walk without
    their hair touched or prodded,
    put on display like African American
    is something to be picked at,
    not proud of.

    Which route home will be the
    safest? Which officer will help
    them cross the street? Who can
    they truly trust? Who will be
    victim to another "they asked for it,
    they had aggressive tendencies"
    The world feels so out of control...

    - - - - -

    Challenge #21:

    If you could taste the rainbow, what color would you want to taste?
    7 lines, cannot use the following words:
    rainbow, mouth, taste or color.
    You can write the name of the specific color.

  • Kitty Cat Lady replied to Poet on the Piano
    6 years ago

    Taste the Rainbow

    A bright arc of hues adorns the sky
    And on my tongue and for my lips
    I'd like to feel the sweetness spread
    I want to know a violet kiss
    A fiery red to set me alight
    Mixed with blue to cool the bite
    A purple buffet of delight

    -------------------
    Challenge #22
    Title: Jekyll and Hyde
    Rhyming couplets

  • Mr. Darcy
    6 years ago, updated 6 years ago

    -Clouds and rainbows-

    Inside of us there are two sides,
    one we show, the other we Hyde.

    Jekylls' seem to be everywhere.
    doing good and being fair.

    When we suppress our darker ways,
    it builds, it blocks our sunny days;

    until all we see are stormy clouds
    and lightning sparks in every row.

    Embrace both sides as a compliment
    be true to you, that's how we're meant.

    Challenge #23
    Title: Home comforts

    Etheree

    Etheree, created about twenty years ago by an Arkansas poet named Etheree Taylor Armstrong, this titled form, the Etheree, consists of ten lines of unmetered and unrhymed verse, the first line having one syllable, each succeeding line adding a syllable, with the total syllable count being fifty-five.This concise form is meant to focus on one idea or subject.

  • Poet on the Piano replied to Mr. Darcy
    6 years ago

    Home comforts (Etheree)

    Rain
    drips down
    my book's spine
    but the pages
    I have memorized.
    I make my bed in ink
    so my soul sleeps with wisdom -
    waterfalls refresh my senses,
    I garden in canyons and deserts.
    Home, a newly enlightened universe.

    ________________

    Challenge #24:

    Easter Egg Hunt
    Tanka. Cannot use the words "grass", "egg", "Easter" or "bunny"

  • Mr. Darcy
    6 years ago, updated 6 years ago

    Weep and ye shall find (tanka)

    Fluffy white snow shrouds
    chocolate gifts this morning,
    leaving children sad;
    their crying falls all around
    revealing a path to Joy

    Challenge #25:

    Easter Egg Hunt
    Cinquain

    or

    A poem of 7 lines - must contain the words: Scarf, Candle and rain

    Title - Sunday musing