Good job...a little short i think

Lovely. i thought it was just perfect, the length

Aww this was really cute! wonderful rhyme btw 5/5 keep it up !! ^.^

Aww great job 5/5

So who's this to mom or dad or best friend
sounds like something i would say to
someone really special

Thanks for the comment :) I like this one of yours. It's really nice. 6/5 bonus.

I wish you made this poem a little longer :) anyway It was a fine written pieace, good job :)

Wow
great job
i liked it
5/5
:]
p.s thanx 4 commenting

Good Job- But it seems a bit incomplete its a bit to short 4/5

Aww this is a really cute awesome poem. good job. =)

Good piece. It would have been better if you capitalized the letters and made it a little bit longer but overall very good.

-Daniel