All Of My Wildest Dreams Can't Beat You.

by Stephanie   Feb 8, 2008


The intensity of the world rests in your eyes,
and my heart seems to stop with just one look.
I discovered it's a glorious revolution of some sorts,
and oh, it's true - One breath is all that it took.

You stand there with a hammer in your hand,
as if you're trying to uncover something you can't see.
And I'll admit to this innocence I'm holding onto,
because for now - this picture looks too real to me.

Wishes and dreams are pouncing on my shoulder,
and the confusion is chipping away at my mind.
Because this sudden realization is suffocating me,
and I'm still scared to see what I'll one day find.

So as I stand here with a fear the size of the world -
laying on my shoulders; You know what I'll do?
I'll stomp through the world and all that remains,
because even all of my wildest dreams can't beat you.

February 8, 2007
- Stephanie Lynn.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Ahhhh I loved this!! Wow hun this just made my day because that final line truly summed up everything I feel right now into a few words ... amazing! I loved how effortlessly everything just flowed .. it flowed naturally from you heart and it showed. The imagery was beautiful and I was captivated.

    "Wishes and dreams are pouncing on my shoulder,
    and the confusion is chipping away at my mind.
    Because this sudden realization is suffocating me,
    and I'm still scared to see what I'll one day find."
    ^Beautifully written stanza that made the poem competed for me. Well done, you have to be one of my fave authors on this site. *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by jLegendc

    Seriously i hav nothing else to say.. i've ran out of things to say.. lol.. all i can say is WOW! *applause*
    you're going into my favs =]

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    An amazing piece. and a very enjoyable read. your choice of words were outstanding and the flow was absolutely flawless. this piece was heartfelt and very deep. the emotions were spectacular. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Breeeezie

    Hey hunn... havent talked for ever!!!! :è( how have u been these daysÉ miss u

  • 16 years ago

    by corinereyes

    Nice choice of words! Keep up the good work.