Beautiful Lie

I like this one. But I was thrown off when the first line to every stanze began with the sun and the sky and then went to the truth. Threw me off. But still a good poem.

Nice work....I liked how you portrayed lies as something that we need to get by because even though the truth is good to hear, sometimes we don't need to hear it....

cheers, josh

This was great!

Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate them, as it's been a while since I wrote anything. Now I have a inspiration for poetry again :) I've read almost all of your poems and really they are beautiful. As I've read them, my feeling towards the person I care about have gotten deeper. Well, I am a hopeless romantic. Keep up the good work girl!

Well yeah somehow.. i didn't think about anything better.. i guess i'm gonna change it cuz my friend said taht also. thanks for the comments :)