How Dare You

by A Phoenyx in Flight   Feb 12, 2008


How dare you say those things.
How dare you turn it around.
You treat me like crap.
And I finally told you.
That I will not take your crap any longer.

You turned it around.
You said that I was threatening you.
You went and told my mom.
All the personal things I trusted you with.

You get mad at me.
When I finally tell you the truth.
How you are ruining my life.
How dare you get mad.

You broke up with me.
You are no longer part of my life.
You don't run my life.
I don't need to tell you all the little details.
Of whats happening in my life.

How dare you do this to me.

THIS IS TO SABRINA
I HAT YOU AND I WANT YOU OUT OF MY LIFE
FOREVER!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mello193

    Oooh I like ut....she's a ho....you rock! Nice poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by SiLeNtLy ScReAmInG

    I like the repetition of the title in the poem. Once again a pattern could make this poem stronger. The feeling of hating that person and the indignation is very evident with your words, but the structure of the overall poem could be improved. For example all your stanzas had 4 lines, but the last one had 5. I'm giving this a 4/5. nice poem, but I'm trying to give you constructive critism to help you improve.

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