Dreams of Reality

by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA   Feb 15, 2008


I was thinking of us last night,
And the times we shared,
How good we were,
But now we are apart,
Yet we still have our,
Dreams

For in our Dreams we are together,
Holding hands on the beach,
Talking all night under the silver moon,
Kissing and holding each other tight,
Dreams

For no matter the distance,
Or the obstacle I will always belong to you,
For we are meant for each other,
Not only in reality, but also in our,
Dreams

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  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Aww.. this was so sad/sweet. The flow was great. Your word choice was good.

    Not only in reality, but also in our,
    Dreams
    ^^I absolutely loved that line!

    You're a good writer!

    Keep writing!!
    Cayce xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    Love the repetition of the word "dreams." I like the title as well, intrigued me. One little thing that bugged me was that the stanzas aren't all the same structure. The poem is great though and I can't see a way that it could be changed, I think it's just some of my obsessiveness coming out in me, I love symmetry haha. 5/5

    Em xXx

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