Her Presence (Tetractys)

by Elapsed   Feb 18, 2008


Her
Beauty
Entices
All my senses
Leaving me stumbling within her presence

*A tetractys is a complete thought written in 20 syllables.
1st line 1 syllable
2nd line 2
3rd line 3
4th line 4
5th line 10

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  • 18 years ago

    by Meme

    This is so great
    I loved the ending
    keep it up 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sam
    I love to see you trying the formed poetry. You have done a great job on this tetractys.
    Take Care
    Love Cindy

  • 18 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Aww, Sammy!
    How nice of you to dedicate yet another poem to me, hehe!!! ....?
    It's beautiful, sweetheart!

    Love,

    5/5 Ingrid

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