Vision OF Beauty

This is my fav poem of yours so far. i liked kind of repetition: no vision - but the sight of you; no feeling - but the warmth; no thoughts - but the thoughts of you. very thorough and tender poem. the title is beautiful btw

"In my eyes there lies no vison,"
-In the title you spell vision a different way than you did in the first stanza.. I think it's spelled vision and not vison.. so, you may wanna change that. :]

Overall, a excellent poem with a rhyme. Very beautiful. You seems like you are very in love. :] 5/5

"In my eyes there lies no vison,
but the sight of your beautiful face.
In my heart there is no feeling,
but the warmth of your embrace."

^This was my favorite part, a great stanza, the rhyme was really excellent!!

"but the thoughts of you,my Love."

You should put a space after the comma.

Overall, nicely done. I could tell your wrote this with passion and from your heart. Take care and keep writing! :)

I'm not really a fan of love poetry, personally. However I can't deny that this is a beautiful poem. It's not the best, but there is certainly nothing wrong with it.

Very beautifully penned.

Very sweet, I thought it was great. Although I think you made a mistake in thisline;
but the warmth of you embrace.
It should be but the warmth of your embrace.
Anyway good job.