This is a good poem... but at the beginning it didnt rhyme and near the end it started rhyming a little.. that might have thrown the flow off a little. but its still good.5/5

Very sweet.............

The flow was ok... The word choice was good and the concept was really nice! 5/5

Maybe you should put this in the love section?

Anyway it's an awesome poem, the tone and the flow was great. I also like the story of it and the last line was really good. Well done.

5/5!

This truly belongs in love poems, it was wonderfully written nice job 5/5

I loved how you put me in the sitution in the beginning ... it was easy to follow. The descriptions were good and the flow was okay. I think you could say much more here and it seemed unfinished to me. That just my opinion. All in all good job. *4/5*

Omg this is so sweet
a very nice story and the flow and rhythm and everything is incredible. written very simply, but in such a sincere way!
And this beginning "hurry, hurry, doors are closing!" makes the poem so dynamic and joyful and positive plus it is heart-felt especially last 3 stanzas
5/5

This poem is very cute and quirky.

The movie ended half past eight
Then we all went our separate ways
But it was a night I'll never forget
When my love and I joined in fate

was my favourite stanza.
keep it up
5/5

This was a very cute poem. I liked the way it was written, but there were a few flow problems where I had to stop and re-read a line. Overall, I loved it! 5/5