Calling

Shattered dreams
Like shattered glass
Icy tears
And brokenness
Frozen hearts
Cold deception bland
Frigged wastelands that we call souls
Deaths angel calling, calling

Whispers my name with dark dead lips
Threatening to pull me farther away from who i once was
Into this dark pit of despair
He's calling, calling my name

This dead abyss some call a home
A crevice deep filled with unknowns
Dead fingers grip my hand
Pulling and tearing me apart
Hoarse throats scream in my ear
Their calling, calling

Frozen faces all around
With blank tear stained eyes so captivating
I scream against their wretched words
These wraiths from hell below

And then my eyes are opened
And i am back at home
My crazed nightmare has ended
But still I'm not alone

- this needs work, help!!!! please give comments and critique it!!!! thnx : )