When flying feels like falling.

by Teria   Feb 18, 2008


When flying feels like falling.

Chances don't
come around too often,
having you fall
for the right guy.

Minds don't race
this fast that much,
in order
to think straight.

Senses aren't this
particularly dedicated
to finding things perfectly ...

But, when flying
feels like falling,
and you can't
catch your breath.

When dreams don't
come true,
and you're
on your last step

You can fight to win
and then win to lose,
just to show you love them.

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  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Awe, I hate this, but I have to be honest, Teria. I hope that's okay.

    I strongly believe that no one can write a perfect love poem. Sure, there are some great ones out there, but I'm thorougly convinced no one can write a perfect one. Love is too hard to explain; if you're truly in love, you can't explain it. You know what I mean?

    So, I must say, I didn't feel enough emotion from it. I didn't like you loved the guy..
    I didn't want to fall in love.

    You're a great writer, though. Just because I don't like one poem means absolutely nothing.

    Keep writing, babe.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

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