Thats kinda sad, I'm here for you if u need someone =) aj

This poem is sad but please dont give up i was like u a month ago but then an old friend came back into my life and everything changed i still have bad days but i can see the light n i am going to be fine
just hang on u will make it and everything will be fine but u completely give up u wont b, i believe u will be fine just try and stay positive
the poem was very well written and well structured, i like the way u wrote it and the length was good it kept me reading and u really do have talent keep writing
5/5

I liked this poem. The flow was nice, the words chosen were decent and the concept was good. I really like this :P 5/5

Well everybody can relate in this poem because everyone has experience depression in their lives. All I can say is... our life is like a tunnel sometimes we go to the 'darkness or sad part of our life' but in the end there's light. So never give up.

Anyway I think that you've written this from your heart, well done.

I have one suggestion.

I used to be so happy.
Now I'm always down.

-I used to be so happy
But now I'm always down.
^^ I think it will flow better that way.

Nice emotion, but me noticed it did not rhyme it was still good though 5/5

Much, much, much better.
This poem was a little more organized
and more in place. It flowed a lot
better. 5/5
<3TAy