Oh wow, thats a very interesting subject and poem you have here. I've honestly as long as i've been on this site, i have never read anything like this, which is very good, i really liked how you used a vampire instead of someone you know. I really liked this alot =] 5/5

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

I love it. i secretly want a vampire lover..haha twas a good poem. flowed nicely and i love the vocab.

Well I don't really like Dark poems but I guess this was a fine written piece, this topic reminds me of the book 'Twilight' I haven't read that book but most of my 'female friends' talks about it. lol

Anyway you have the potential to improve in your future poems so never stop writing :)

This poem was very dark. I absolutely loved the mood you set for the poem. You are bringing light to a fantasy world that so many people love to hear about! Wonderfully written! 5/5

I love this poem its original and a good time killer

Your a great writer, I really like reading your poetry. Hope to see more. 5/5

P.s. thank you for your comments. :)

I really loved this poem...it kind of put me in a dark place, but at the same time had a sensual vibe to it...5/5

Hmm...
I liked this one okay, you're a great writer but the lack of punctuation and capitilization in the poem really takes away from it. It would have flowed better had it been better punctuated, but it really was beautiful anyway.
4/5
~gabriella

I like vampires and I like your writing style.
Very artistic and imaginative. 5*

Ooo very deep
well done! great poem, nice work

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Wow I love the last line!!! Wonderful job!

Vampire kisses, im going to let you in
Vampire teeth, was there suppose to pain
Vampire breath, swimming within thy blood
I love these insane senses, but mostly I love the mundane

-what a line,.its great,love it,..^_^

This was a good poem at first start then I got mixed up in the end the mundane part I thought did not work well with the whole theme so I thought that wa the only let down other then that nice try Plot121

MY NEW FAVORITE POEM!!! I love it! :)

Love this...its great....

I like this one alot it's good!!!!!!!

Wow this is rather unique and great at the same time... the come bite me parts annoyed me tho but it seemed necessary to be written.. i really love this!

"You're saving me from my nightmare
You're my knight of glowing night
You're everything I ever could dream of
I have always preferred black to white"
This was the best part of your poem and this last phrase " I have always preferred black to white really gives it a perfect scary effect! Great Job. 5/5