Cant u tell?...

by scarsRbeautiful   Feb 23, 2008


Depression...
you can hear it in my silence,
my sobs.
you can feel it in my slowing pulse,
my shallow breathing.
you can see it in my tear-stained cheeks,
my scarred wrists.
you notice this evil that has taken over my body,
my mind.
...depression.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mandy Grace

    Hey!!!! i loved both your poems!!!!!! i would comment the other one also but i dont have much time!!! i give YOU 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    I completely understand the emotions flowing through this but don't let it control you ok? It'll eat you up from the inside out :P Fantastic job on writing this and you really have the startings of great talent, keep it up :) 5/5
    ~*Rhea*~

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Short,but such strong words.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Simple, short, and magnificent. This was a very emotional poem, Good job.

    You are new, you are starting off really well.

    5/5.

    Take care,

    -Sarah A.

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