Wish I Would've Changed

by scarsRbeautiful   Feb 24, 2008


I swallow the poisonous capsules
one by one
somehow believing that they could
possibly make my miserable life better.
How could i be so...
irresponsible?

My heart beat quickens
it pulsates violently
My weak knees buckle
and i grasp the door frame for support
I gasp for air
The pain is excruciating
can't take it any more...

My breathing steadies
wait, there's none at all.
I have closed my eyes
and realized
that i have just
seen the world
for
the
last
time.

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  • 16 years ago

    by J u l e s

    Its a deep poem. very deep but so beautiful and amazing. i have been stuck in that place for so long and still am trying to get out and learn to survive. but this is what people have to do every day of their life, and as much as we want to hear its going to be okay we have to learn it on our own that our life will be okay and just everything will be alright

  • 16 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    Very sad poem but I've been there :P Not an easy place to get out of but hold on, things do get better and thats not the answer. Great job writing this, I loved the strong emotions flowing through it :) 5/5
    ~*Rhea*~

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Sad poem, showing a very powerful story of a girl, who lost her way, very sad,but great poem