Whisper

by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA   Feb 24, 2008


Please stay back,
Not too close to me.
You don't know where I've been,
Don't sit next to me.

Stay very far from me,
Like I wanna be far from you.
This place is so cold,
Don't talk for me.

I don't want to talk,
I'm wasting my time.
Don't make me laugh,
Don't make me cry.

Don't ask my name,
Don't look me in my eyes.
Just simply walk away,
And leave me alone.

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  • 17 years ago

    by L0V3 Mi fAMilY

    I'm really wonderin who you wrote this for....it's a good poem though!

  • 17 years ago

    by xxxlOvElY sWeEtHeArTxxx

    Ok I enjoyed this one..but iI kind of diddnt understand this person was being so cold.

  • 17 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    Oh, I liked this. It was kind of ery, and seems like it could be about a lot of things.

    You do have one spelling mistake I think needs pointed out:

    Third stanza, second line
    "I'm waisting my time."
    it should be "wasting".
    Just thought I should let you know about that.

    Also, I think, (and just in my opinion) it would be better suited in the "dark poetry" section.
    This seems more of a dark poem to me.

    But I rather did enjoy how it was told. kind of a "stay the hell away from me!"

    =)
    5/5

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