Don't Forget To Remember Me

by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA   Feb 27, 2008


You don't know what love really is,
That is why you hurt everything.
You take love as an advantage,
That love I give you.

I know really well that you hurt me,
But I still happen to think of you.
I hope you don't regret,
All this hurt you have given me.

Before you came into my life,
My life was different.
I didn't regret anything,
My life was colorful.

With your cruelness and stubborness,
You filled my world with sadness.
With your lies you gave,
My heart alive but somehow dead.

You make me cry,
And I don't deserve it.
I do nothing but love you,
And give myself completely.

The hurtness you left me today,
Will heal with passing time.
One day that day will come,
When you will get hurt.

Someone will make you cry,
When you fall in love,
And you will remember me,
Because the love that I gave you is real.

Someone will hurt you,
The way you hurt me.
And there won't be a way back,
Because that's destiny.

You will feel the loneliness
And this damn coldness.
Someone will make you cry,
And that will be your punishment.

Don't foreget to remember,
When you will be crying.
Because you'll regret what you did,
And will want me back.

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  • 16 years ago

    by L0V3 Mi fAMilY

    I wonder who you wrote this one for. I like it though baby!

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    The last part was the best, all of it was great, you could feel the sadness, but also the anger in this poem, great job

  • 16 years ago

    by Brandon Lee

    First I would like to say, this was very sad. I have felt similar emotions before and so this poem was probably able to captivate me so easily because of that.
    I have found nothing negative to say about this poem, so I will only say good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Waw , i read it allll so romantic, realy you got big heart and true love , i feel it now

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    The poem and emotion itself is really good.
    But, there were parts, like for instance . . the first stanza :

    "You don't know what love really is,
    That is why you hurt everything.
    You take love as an advantage,
    That love I give you."

    The flow is a bit off in this, and when I took like " that is" and made it that's and a few other places like such - it just had a better flow, I'm not quite sure why, because a lot of of times when you break them up it gives more emphasis to it and whatnot, but with this it didn't.

    The poem is great though, don't get me wrong.
    And, even though I'm not the best " critic " nor the best writer, if you'd like me to break it down stanza by stanza and let you know things that may seem better, in my opinion - I'd be glad to. I just think it needs a bit of tweaking to it. (:

    But, it's your work - and you did a great job with it.

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