I Wish You Knew This Song Was About You

by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA   Feb 27, 2008


Please forgive me,
Love of a friend there's none.
I'm sure of that,
I didn't want to hurt you.

Even if I decided to make my life,
Doesn't mean I will never forget about you.
Even if I decided to be brave,
Doesn't mean I will hurt you.

I'm honest, I will never leave you,
My greatest wish is to have you.
Close to me, to take care of you,
Close to me, to help you out.

All I ask for is to believe me,
Trust me and support me.
God up above blesses me,
I just wish you knew this song is for you.

If only you knew,
What I feel for you,
What I would do for you.
I do this for you.

You are my beautiful star,
And I want you to hear me for the first time,
That I promise to guide you,
And protect you for as long as I can.

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  • 16 years ago

    by L0V3 Mi fAMilY

    Hey, you wrote this for Mara, huh!? Damn, why did that crazy girl have to leave! Lol!
    I love you babe!

  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    This poem is really sweat. The structure is built nicely, but I still find some things not in order. There are no rhymes. You repeat "you" at the end of every line in the third stanza and repeat "me" at the end of every line in the fourth stanza, besides the last line. This repeatance breaks the flow a bit. Although that, a nice poem 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Nice work i love the feeling u hide, and i love the part saying
    All I ask for is to believe me,
    Trust me and support me.
    God up above blesses me,
    I just wish you knew this song is for you.

    If only you knew,
    What I feel for you,
    What I would do for you.
    I do this for you.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    Good work... Nice poem... 5/5

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