Offering

by StonedGooberz   Feb 27, 2008


If i offered you my soul,
what would you do with my love?
let me burn in a twisted hell,
or dance with me into the heavens above?

if i offered you my heart,
what would you do with my passion?
simply spend a night with me,
and leave me standing without compassion?

if i offered you a future,
what would you do with the time?
spend everyday within my arms,
and listen to my little poetic rhymes?

if i offered you everything i had,
what would you do with it all?
let me have you for all eternity,
or stand back watching me fall?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Very beautiful poem... It's emotional and the words portray such a beautiful feeling. The flow was great... and the concept is common, but never old. I really love this poem! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    A very interesting piece. I loved the way you worded it and the vocabulary you used. Again, the flow was flawless. This piece is simple, but expressed so much. Another amazing piece. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Waw , i love it, realy nice work5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Okay so this on is a awesome! i loved it! Wonderful way of putting questions that everyone wants to ask into a simple poem. It was an amazing read that flowed very nicely. You did great, on everything, the rhymes, flow, word choice, okay, you get it! lol keep it up! :]

  • 16 years ago

    by xXxConfused and Torn Apart By FatexXx

    I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!

    ily~ur bff
    cassie

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