So A*L*O*N*E*

by Love vs Fate   Feb 28, 2008


So alone in this crazy world.
Don't know what to say,
Don't know what to do!
I thought you loved me,
I thought you cared.
But i guess you don't,
even care.
You see me crying, you ask whats wrong.
But you cant see these painful tears. These
tears are falling from my deep blue eyes,
its not a big surprise.
I'm just so alone, in this crazy world.

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  • 16 years ago

    by 0oAshleyo0

    Once again...
    Amazing peice of work!
    i think everybody feels this way at once!
    i know i have...:(

    Great Poem!

    <3
    XxAshleyxX

  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    a great short poem filled with sadness, I just loved it..you have nice way with words. well im off to bed now, 5.5 from me sweety;)
    kisses stephanie

  • 16 years ago

    by Sammerz

    Awww this was sad and im sorry this had to happen to you but im sure things will get better for you Loved the poem
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by MyMuse

    Im sorry for this. i know how you feel, i feel the excat same thing...i feel worthless and i cry but no one seems to care, they just like to hurt me more than I ever felt. And the weird part is i have blue eyes too :P but i love the emotion in this short and "bitter" sweet poem, good job

    <3 <3

    Take Care My Dear,
    CourtneyxHolland

    check some of my poetry, alot of them are depressed like this.

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