Comments : You are my fallen one

  • 16 years ago

    by Angel Demetrice

    I said i would never leave you,
    and to this day i will keep my promis.
    i do love you that i did not lie,
    i promised to stay with you,
    i did not lie about that,
    i will hold you close at night,
    even as the stars falls and burn our souls to this planet,
    and when the sun shines i will block the light so you dont get burnt.

  • 16 years ago

    by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost

    Great write great flow and great emotion keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost

    Great write great flow and great emotion keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Good emotion to express

  • 16 years ago

    by Mike Martin

    I like it alot....shows just how we need that one person...even if it is a fallin angel....nice.....xoxoxo

  • 14 years ago

    by Hidden1

    I love the emotion that this poem gives. I love the fact that it's relateable and it tells a story. Awesome poem and keep writing with emotion. For me this poem spoke to the soul and heart of man. Excellent title for and excellent poem.