Deb
You did such a fantastic job on this challenge. Your imagery and word choices are amazing.

Shooting stars embroider dreams
Cloud collage not what it seems
Ocean waves wash printed sand
Lifeline breaks on wrinkled hand

I love this stanza. The feelings that go through the mind while reading your words take me away to a different place.
~Bravo~
Love Cindy

That was so pretty and full of captivating words! I enjoyed the flow and rhyme.
Charisma*

Debbie,

You never cease to amaze me!
What a beautiful job you have done on this challenge..

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

I simply can not choose a favorite stanza because well .... they are all brilliant

It's as though you dipped a magical pen in ink and painted a picture because the imagery is amazing!

Lifeline breaks on wrinkled hand
^^^
I love how this line ends the beginning and last stanza ....
Such a unique write Debbie, the title fits so perfectly.

What a brilliant read!! Really enjoyed this heart moving poem, awesome word usage and imagery through out!!.. Fantastic!!

Although this was a rather well written poem, I didn't really like it. The words were great, as was the rhythm, but I just wasn't particularly interested by it. I found it dull. Sorry.

Brad

Well as you can see Brad...this is a wonderful poem....Congrats Debbie :)

Nice

What an amazing poem!!!.....Excellent choice of words!!!!Keep it up..You go girl..!!!5/5

This is amazing!

What a beautiful poem!!.. each stanza and every line was so beautifully written.. amazing job! but u already know that =) ... great poem keep it up!

Great job i like this one , although i feel not much follow you in the entire peome ambience but i like it

Hmm i never heard a poem quite like it, its quite good 5/5

I really dig this poem, i like your use of repitition, this poem is very well written. 5/5

great job.

I hope i can write this good one day! ur great at what you do.

That was really good!

Like a medieval incantation....

Great poem
keep it up
xo!

Wow!!! that's a very good poem here... you show strong emotions and nice words... gud luck

WOW. THiiS POEM WAS EXCELLENT!
YOUR CHOiiCE OF WORDS AND HOW
THEY FLOWED TOGETHER NiiCELY WAS
EXTRAORDiiNARY. GREAT WORK!