THE END OF LOVE !!!

by Mister 47   Mar 2, 2008


When you see in his eyes
a sneaking smile like a lie
when you don't hear words of those
days , that makes you close

when you look at thee and smile
and your feeling seem fragile
when you can not as much you try
make disappear a sorrow or cry

when your heart is blues all time
your helpless to fix the rhyme
that your hearts play together
that should replay , replay forever

when you sit in dark alone
thinking what you did wrong ?
you loved her all you can
you been her lover ,her superman

when the heart kill you in inside
blame you, and burn on sides
you want to fight , to hold that light
that beam now , in past so bright

when all you loose , when all is lost
your feel it end the pain is most
when you think , the breath is less
your life from here , turn to mess

when you lack of eat , you lack of drink ,
when you lack the breath , the ability to think
when all that you think is what did i do?
when you look at mirror don't seem like you

when you offer more from you to try
and you see the useless of this you cry
when the heart is hurt , he bleed my friend
know by then your reach the end

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Latest Comments

  • 15 years ago

    by HvN

    No love can never end!!!!!!!!!!!!

    moucha DON'T LET IT END!

    don't u dare!

    nice ending :]

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by nina

    The poem was great
    and you know why ?
    cause i can feel you
    and u used some words that realy showed that your honest in what r you writing
    it's amazing .... go on and on ...

  • 15 years ago

    by Sarah

    The poem was great... Just like a sorrowful lullaby ! drawing a sad end to what seemed to be an everlasting love and trend.. there are few mistakes but all in all it was great 5/5