Dead, Still Dead

by HollywoodSmile   Mar 3, 2008


Angels' tears
mix with forbidden
fears

can't escape
this churning,
thick, black hell

sinking, thinking,
trembling thoughts of days gone by,
things i should've not

nothing left
to remember,
but dead december's play

i will not stand
another day
of old november's way

another year
now come and gone
no reason to fight,

against.

time's.

end.

    report violation
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  • 14 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This piece is terrific!! The use of emotion is what really carries it and I am so amazed that this is a piece that won. Amazing job.

  • 14 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Hey its the first time for me to read ur writings and believe me Im really impressed. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Taylor

    I love this.

    Really good, and even though it's simple, it says a lot.

    Keep it up. :)

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    In a word awesomeeeeeeeeeeee

  • 17 years ago

    by Lost and Delirious

    Simple, and i love it. 5/5

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