I stepped out of my body

by Maddyxxx   Mar 4, 2008


Another lonely night,
another f_cking episode
some more pain added
here i am
falling apart
staring at whats infront of me
took some pills
i can feel a high
yea thats it now im dieing
i take the blade
and there it goes
across my wrist
and there my blood flows
i gasp at first but i am fine
then what seems to be for ever
is only an hour away
I blink my very eyes
to see that i have done nothing wrong
but i am scared that to this day maybe just maybe
next time that i step out of my body
that I will do something so insanely crazy,,, as to committing my own suicide.......

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  • 16 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    What the hell, that was a good poem tho
    XD

  • 16 years ago

    by shadow

    Damn deep! Could picture it all in my mind as I read. Great job

  • 16 years ago

    by Laith

    Suicide, apart of me just died
    a bit of my soul got outside
    when i read what i used to hide
    fight, every day and every night
    to convience my self, it will be allright
    but i lie, my soul believes
    cause something inside isn't a deceive
    so i live to read your lines
    and i return to the age of nine
    so innocent and so secure
    but now i'm ill, don't know the cure

    I loved it, really.

  • 16 years ago

    by oddi tea

    Morbid...VERY morbid. May God find you peace at heart. Nice flow however, good job. 3/5

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