Fallen

by Kitten   Mar 9, 2008


I've fallen into darkness
And this time can't escape
I've fallen many times
But this fall is for eternity.
I can run real fast
But in the end I've gotten nowhere
This time I can't escape.
I've fallen into darkness
With no one at my side
No one here to share
My darkness with
Or to make loneliness go away.
I cry for help
With no reply
I am the only one to fall this far.
I've fallen into darkness
With nothing here to do
Nothing but cry for help
And run till my body hurts
But all I've found is darkness.
Nothing but rot in this miserable hell.
I've fallen into darkness
So far I can't escape
I've tried crying for help
And running till I fall over
But nothings going to work
I've fallen way to far.
I've fallen into darkness
To far to escape.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    This is a wonderful write...
    great flow... well described..

    "And running till I fall over
    But nothings going to work
    I've fallen way to far.
    I've fallen into darkness
    To far to escape. "

    ^^ liked this part the most... it reminds me of the times when i just want to turn back time... when i wish to change something only to realise that its too late...

    good job....

    keep writing..

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Very amazing write! I loved every line of it! The flow was great, the word choice was good, and the concept was brilliant! Not to mention the way it grabbed me while I was reading it! 5/5