Save me before it's too late, never mind it's already to late.

by Amber   Mar 9, 2008


Stop it! I will not
fight with my brother
anymore.

Please do not hit me!
SMACK!
I-I-I am sorry.

You just laugh manically
and examine your work.
You left your bloody hand print
on my cheek.

I will not cry...
The tears roll down
my cheeks. I can
taste the salty hatred.

What are you doing
with that knife? No, not
again!

Please, I am begging
you! Too late you carved
the sign into my chest.
This time you carved
BB for bad boy.

I am getting dizzy.
Why is everything
becoming so dark?

I saw the color drain
from your face as I
fell to the floor.

I still love you mommy
and daddy.

Good night forever.

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  • 16 years ago

    by robin milford

    Whoa that was very dark most of the stuff I have read of yours is light and beautiful good to see u can cover other dimentions

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow, thats pretty strong writing, hope all is ok x good work x

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Wow. this sent so many shivers down my spine. i am curious, is this about you, or not? if so, if you ever need to talk, i'm here....

    I still love you mommy
    and daddy.

    Good night forever.

    ^ this is the purity of love. even those who harm you, you love them back. the true essence of how we should live. it's such a hauntingly beautiful phrase...great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Wow...that was really good but reallly really sad...i really hope this isnt true but amazing job writing it 5/5 <33

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    This is sad :[

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