When?

by CWG   Mar 11, 2008


I thought it was always going to be
You and me against the world
Living, loving, wild and free
That I would always be your girl

What happened to that feeling
That special love we used to share
When did we stop seeing
When was it just no longer there

Did we lose sight of what was real
Or did we just grow apart
Did we lose our ability to feel
Or just what was in our heart

3/10/2008

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  • 15 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Man this must happen to about every couple
    in the world kind of reminded me of the band
    <staind> song <everything changes>
    read the lyrics if you get a chance 5/5
    on this excellent poem cy

  • 16 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    Wow your very good at creating a nice and easy to read flow....
    I like how every second line rhymes...

    But really you just need the 2nd and 4th sentence to rhyme.......... And then you can go crazy and use weird words in the first and 3rd lines.......

    I like!!!

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Good poem, i hope things got better now

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