His Kiss (dear diary)

by xxxlOvElY sWeEtHeArTxxx   Mar 11, 2008


DEAR DIARY:
I just experienced the most exotic kiss of my life... I never knew something as in complex as this..could cause my skin to burn with desire.. He slowly fondled his fingers through my hair. as he gazed into my eyes. He gradually lied me onto my back.
He hovered over me, and as if to taunt me, he faintly caused a breeze from my head all the way down to my toes. I slightly grinned as chill pumps followed the trail of his breeze.....AND THEN HE DID IT... He rapturously kissed me.
Even though the maximum amount of passion was in my lips.. i felt erotic all over my body. I felt his hands explore my entire being.
My skin was in flames, every time he caressed me he created a steam, that only we two could notice. Even though My eyes were adjoined I could sense them rolling. That 40 second kiss, felt everlasting. Once our breathtaking event had reached it finally..
He gently moved his lips to my ear whispered into my ear..I Love You Soo Much.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    I love how you described everything so beautifully .. it really added a nice touch to the poem. Well done. *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    This was a very cute piece, and I like the idea behind it. I especially like the way it was written.
    I find free verse is more emotionally explanitory, however this piece was a little choppy.
    I think if you edit a bit, and just make it flow more easily, it will indeed turn out as a splendidly sensual piece.

    Keep it up,
    --Elly.

  • 16 years ago

    by loveANDloss

    Omg that was intense

  • 16 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    Dang so this how girls feel when you kiss them...j/k i love the emotion it was great you had me on every bloody word great work-
    raindrops 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    OoOoO nice for a journal I must say
    I think to make this poem even more
    Romantic
    try describing it like what it felt like (in more detail)
    what the atmosphere was like
    I think you'd have a winner
    5/5

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