Hidden

by noha   Mar 11, 2008


For so long I have hidden away my heart.
But something happens when I hear your voice.
Feelings and wants come rushing back.
My heart taking over in this I have no choice.

So many times have I been given false hope.
And for once I want to have it be true.
To throw caution fully to the wind.
Only wanting to believe souly in you.

To have the smiles and the laughs.
No looking back on the moments only to cry.
To keep you in my heart forever.
And not having to ask the question why.

So now I am going to give it my all.
Close my eyes and see the world through yours.
Let my heart and your hand be my guide.
No more secrets, no more closed doors.

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 15 years ago

    by Boy

    Nice piece

  • 15 years ago

    by sunnah

    U r truly amazing
    i've read all ur stuff and u r sooooooo good at this
    may allah bless u noha

  • 15 years ago

    by Sora

    Wow! a very expressive poem, and i lovedd it!!

    So now I am going to give it my all.
    Close my eyes and see the world through yours.
    Let my heart and your hand be my guide.
    No more secrets, no more closed doors.

    i love those lines! my favorite!
    please keep up the wonderful work! =]

  • 15 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wonderful job, an enjoyable read 5/5!

  • 15 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    A truly inspiring piece of poetry. a short and simple write, but still amazing. you are saying that you have been hurt lots so that you keep your soul hidden and now you do not want to stay silent anymore, you will share your secrets with the man you love? - that is my interpretation

    a wonderful write and read

    5/5

    Keep Writing, lovely
    As Always,
    ~NinjaGirl~