I have had times where i felt like this especailly with my new g/f and the the fact that my past relationships bring back some blackish mistrust but like stanza said "So now I am gunna give it my all
Close my eyes and see the world through yours
Let my heart and your hand be my guide
No more secrets, no more closed doors" see now that hit me. nice job lovin ur piece - raindrops 5/5

I like it because it tells the truth that is how things should be. I liked the word choice and the flow. keep up the great work =D

I absolutely loooovvveeed it! =)
The flow was just about perfect and the fact that you actually used a "voice" in this poem makes it even more great. The very last stanza was the best part for me (i went back and read it over again) Your vocabulary was distinctive. Overall, perfectly and beautifully written
5/5

xxPaSsIoNaTe kIsSeSxx

Wow that was very inspiring thoughts.... i love those very true feelings its seems lighten up my heart and soul.. great structures and portraying those emoitons.. keep it up and keep on writing all inside ur heart.. 5/5

Great job! I really like to read love poems and I was glad to see your newest one was in this category! First I didn't really catch up with the rhyming, but I'm a dumb one so I had to read the poem twice *grin* The ending was the cherry on top of this cake ^___^

A very beautiful write. I like the shift in moods from the beginning to the end of the poem. The beginning really caught my attention, and held. :] And definietly I loved the last stanza. :] 5/5.

Thanks all foe the comment

This was probably one of the better love poems you've written. Good flow, good choice of words. Keep up the good work.

This is such a good poem. It shows a lot of emotion. Good job! 5/5

I really liked this one alot.
my point of this one was how you want to have that strong bond with the one your with which is amazing feeling and you want to make everything work out and tell them everything. i think you did an amazing job.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

Another very beautifully written poem. I loved the flow to this. And the concept really impressed me. Good write!

Great poem once again! Everyone hopes for a real true love and you did a great job writing about this and really expressing your feelings. I like how at the end you decide to give it a chance - it really gives the poem a positive feeling.

Amazing job once again. Keep it up! 5/5 .. and thanks for the comment! =)

Good layout easy to read but I did'nt quite understand the rhyming pattern yu were using. I liked the bit that says:
'So now I am gunna give it my all
Close my eyes and see the world through yours
Let my heart and your hand be my guide'
And again you can feel the emotions. 5/5

"So now I am gunna give it my all
Close my eyes and see the world through yours
Let my heart and your hand be my guide
No more secrets, no more closed doors. "

excellent job noha

Very sweet put some punctuations, but touching it was, splendid enjoyed it made me smile heh.. 5/5 keep writing you have so much talent

Omg!.i loved it it was really good...this was my fav. stanza..

To have the smiles and the laughs
No looking back on the moments only to cry
To keep you in my heart forever
And not having to ask the question why

great job! 5/5
***aLy***

The only thing I don't like about this piece is use of word "gunna" in the last stanza. You can say "going to" which will make the flow in that line better and it would be grammatically correct or you can say "gonna" but I personally dislike that word. i don't want to offend you, that is just my honest opinion.
Other than that I think that you truly did a wonderful job with this poem. You expressed your emotions in a great way and every stanza is heartfelt, truly deep and touching. Whole poem sounds so sincere and it holds great beauty and positivity. I like the topic and the way you expressed your feelings, too.
Overall, greatly written. 5/5 from me

Nice work here i liked the line( To throw caution fully to the wind
Only wanting to believe souly in you), its almost like saying you want to led by him no matter where it takes you.

Keep up writing so many good poems x 5/5

Wonderful poem i really enjoyed how you ended it.

-Syn

Beautiful poem!!