Comments : Mr. Scissors and Ms. Razor Blade

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hiya Amber,
    This was predictable, but that didn't stop my skin from crawling. The image you created was crystal clear. You penned this so well.

    Michael

  • 16 years ago

    by Dragon Slayer

    Are you really doing this? because i care about you, so please dont. 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by halie

    Wow its sad,
    is it true
    but rlly great it wuz full of suspense
    5/5
    i loved it
    :]

  • 16 years ago

    by MyMuse

    WHOA!!! That was just hell of amazing!!! I mean like really!! I just loved every bit of it, call me a freak why dont ya? I was very intense with it. I just couldnt stop reading but when it was over i cried for 3 minutes now here i am writting the comment but i just love it. Pure dark. Pure misery. At first i thought the girl was going to kill her father but bam she tries to cut herself to death but like i keep saying a wonderful job!!!!!!! AMAZING!! Really!!! You have such a talent o.o i wish i could give more than a 5/5 but between you and me itll be 500000000000/500000000000 :DDD

    Just Keep Up the Good Work
    Damn...

    With Care,
    CourtneyxHolland

  • 16 years ago

    by XxBAYBiiGiRLxX

    You put so much emotion into your poems i love them!
    this is my favourite tho, so sad!
    xo

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Alot of feeling, sorry for you, hope things do get better, really

  • 16 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    So real, i was acting out your poem in my mind it was that clear....soooo sad though, i hope you are ok.....

  • 16 years ago

    by xXxPeRc0C3txXx

    Wow, is this how you feel. my best friend just tried to kill himself. and it killed me. don't you ever think of how many people u would hurt if you killed your self. if you ever need to talk to someone send me a message. i'll listen to anything you have to say. i spent a long time in a mental inst. because of suicide. and i seen the effect it had on my family and it crused me.

  • 16 years ago

    by BreathesToBleed

    WOW ... do you really go threw this ... ?
    i know how it feels ...
    i hope that you dont really have to put up with this and i hope that you dont think of suicide ...
    but it is a excelent poem aii i really love it just becuase of the effort and feelng put into this poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Love vs Fate

    I have one thing to say, cheer up, things do get better and dont worry, you can get through this!
    and remember suicide is never the answer,

  • 16 years ago

    by desiree

    Dangg.

    You're an |*awsome*| writer..
    I love your poem.
    You use excellent detail.

    Is this true though?
    Did he really do this to you & your mom?
    =-\

    -Message me (I'm concerned)
    I rate it a 5/5 =]

  • 16 years ago

    by RazorBladeRomance1905

    Omg, that was so good.....
    awesome writing i love it
    xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by slowlyxfallingxapart

    Wow. This is amazing. I can not believe how good this is. I almost cried reading the whole thing. I am so sorry if this is what you go through. I know what your going through though. Maybe not the parent part, but the Ms.Razorblade and Mr.Scissors part.

  • 16 years ago

    by caitlin

    Wow this is a really sad but amazing story. if this is what your going through or need to talk then send me a msg. id love to talk to you. keep up the good work xx

  • 16 years ago

    by julisa

    Very good poem. I liked how you referred to the scissor and razor as Mr. and Mrs. keep writing you have talent.

  • 16 years ago

    by MusoXDanielle

    Best poem i have read in a long time!!

    Amazing imagry and emotion used in this poem!

    Please keep writing!

    Danielle
    xx

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Norman John Henry Campbell

    That truly was a great poem i thought she was going to kill her father but killed herself... Keep writing the imagery was brilliant.... Loved it im giving so much more then a five

  • 16 years ago

    by Katie

    This is soo sad, i was like crying in the middle of reading it :'(

  • 16 years ago

    by aisyned

    I freaking
    LOVE
    this poem
    omg your so...i needa better word then talented.
    Ok your so .AMAZING at writing =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Natalie

    This is just such a heart-felt and painful poem, I just dont know what to say. Only thing I can utter is, I'm touched.

    Keep doing what u do coz it works.

    Natalie.