Depression...

by Daisy Wells   Mar 14, 2008


D ~ Devoid of any feeling, a deep and dark hole
When you feel you have no purpose, your lost within your soul

E~ Experiencing overwhelming sadness, crippling your heart
When you feel you've lost control, it's ripping you apart

P~ Pressure mounting with in, thoughts being conjured inside
When you feel your all alone, you want a place to hide

R~ Resenting what you've become, you want to feel at peace
When you feel emotionally drained, will you ever find release

E~ Exploring within yourself, you trying to fins some sense
When you feel you can't go on, every thought is so intense

S~ Searching for some reasoning, why you are in this terrible mess
When you feel you are to blame, Your life's taken over by stress

S~ Simmering in your gut, the emotions just want to erupt
When you feel there's no salvation, your mind is just corrupt

I~ Intent on punishing yourself, you find dark ways to cope
When you feel there's no way out, you've lost your faith and hope

O~ Obscene and angered voices, plagued your heart, soul and mind
When you feel your going crazy, your old self you cannot find

N~ Never finding help, no one will understand
When you feel you've lost the battle, will someone reach out their hand

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  • 15 years ago

    by Frozen hearT

    U are so creative...... with the word depression u create a poem......... wow amazing..... i'll never think twice for giving 5/5 for this one =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashlee

    OMG I really love this poem.. It was awesome.. this is the poem I asked u cud I send too my b/f thanks alot ur sweet and very very very taltented.. Keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    This was your best for the year! once again great job. keep on writing

    S~ Searching for some reasoning, why you are in this terrible mess
    When you feel you are to blame, Your life's taken over by stress

    ^^^ my favorite stanza btw.
    5/5, your friend
    ~Forever Broken~

  • 16 years ago

    by Big hersh

    Good write 5 out of 5

  • 16 years ago

    by Vonnie McHugh

    Hi your poem is so true I have been there in most of those aspects so great write well done .