TO LOVE A DAD LIKE YOU

by minnu   Mar 15, 2008


It pains me so,To say goodbye
To watch you lay,To watch you die.

For all these yars,You've been my dad
I've been so blessed,For all I've had.

The Firm strong voice,That taught me well
The gentle hand,That Grin-like smile

At this time,I feel so weak
I'm selfish of wanting you to stay with me.
I have no regrets,As my love is so strong
For a Daddy who I've treasured all along.

Just know that I will always be
A daughter that loves you for eternity
And after that time has gone and passed,
My love will still linger to the test.

I Thank God you're at Peace
The next Journey unfurled,
As you Rest Near the Things
You love the most in this world,

I miss you so much
Feeling empty in stride,
I'll Treasure the Memories
To fill the void that's inside.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Beautiful write...

    "For all these yars,You've been my dad
    I've been so blessed,For all I've had."

    ^^ yars=years??

    very emotional and touching... great work..

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    This is a strong poem.
    You can feel the emotion when you read it, I like it=]
    the poem is well written and structured.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by cataclysmicSoul

    Loved this poem, really sad and great emotion are involved
    great jobXxX

  • 16 years ago

    by ReinaPuente

    This is ahmazing it almost made me cry.....its like i can almost feel what you feel...i would hug you as if i knew you....tehe

    love it!
    -rayray-

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    This is a really great poem
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    and thanks for the comment