Doesn't Matter

Aww... this is such a sad, but true poem! I love it. It's really nice that you can write about this because it really opens up people... It really affected me. Well done.

Great poem! it's true that we can't control what's gonna happen in the future.. sh*t happens.. 5/5

This poem is so true,sometimes it seems like the good ones are taken.Your rhyming and flow are so smooth that you don'y really think about it,you just get lost in the message.Excellent!

A wonderful write that has had about everything said about it, at least I can compliment you and add my vote.

Rachel,This poem brings home an important truth,that we need to value the time we have with people,because you never know what the next minute will bring.I don't think you need to change anything! Excellent write.