Defend your Castle

by Amir Riveroll   Mar 16, 2008


Common questions...
You wonder why, things go so wrong
your courage abandons you
when you thought you were strong
God who once took pity
somtimes takes very long
or why does rage overpower you
those are questions that go on and on...

Headaches come and go
all you can do is take tynenol.

Things might go sour after little time
life or love must end, its a steep hill hard to climb
Then you must take responsibility for your crimes
and take pride by putting your life back online.
Nothing really goes right
living isnt easy, its a battle to survive
just know the battle will never end
once one battle is won another is about to arrive

tradegies will occur whether you want it or not
when you least expect it they bombard you
for days, months, and years nonstop
somtimes you get tired
you think youve given it all you've got
but its not over until the fat lady sings
and she wont stop till the day you rot

some people cry when they are in trouble
some pray to a god
while others blame the devil
some ask for more
while others become criminal rebels
and take their lives when things get rough
whipe your tears and prove you got guts
show your strenght
keep your chin high and show youve had enough

when your alone there is only one visitor
his name is death, and he keeps closing in
he tries to breach our castle of weakness
and destroys our consensce surrounded by sin
he prays on those who leak fear
and those who's temple shivers from within
never let up and surely dont think about surrender
for life is short, so be a strong and faithful defender.

Life is a waterfall moving one way, no going back. so do things right the first time!! caz theres no going back

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  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    Very well said...I was rich wit words of wisdom..Apparently thats ur style, (without usin punctuations, well i wasnt usin that too but then trust me it will make ur poem looks better)..But since You seem to have a vast of vocabs or shud i say you have extended imagination which is good, therefore i am giving you 5/5 for putting your thoughts into words..Good Job..