TheLossOfTwoLifes.

by desiree   Mar 17, 2008


"Stop it pleaase!"
She yells while getting beat
Getting kicked & thrown around
Lying there motionless, on the ground
Drips of blood, & bruises too,
She has to hide at school.
People see the bruises & ask "What's wrong"
She turns around, & wishes she was gone.
Gone; as in, no longer alive.
Daddy beats her more, dying on the inside.
So much pain, she can no longer bare
She gets a gun, without care
She puts it to her head, places her hand on the trigger,& let's it go.
Daddy rushes up to her, & feels so low.
Grabbin the gun, from the floor
He picks it up.
Shoots himself, he can no longer take it no more.
The life of two people, are gone
Daddy's fault; all along...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Amber

    Awe thats deep for sure good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Confined

    Well i no everyone else sed this lol but it tis sad indeed =P tis gewd tho lol

  • 16 years ago

    by sandy

    Wow ... very strong... you're very good keep writing hun

  • 16 years ago

    by MusicIsMyBoyfriendx3

    Really goodd.

    -xtina

  • 16 years ago

    by Unamed

    This was really good!!!!!!.......great writter keep it up!

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