Forever Morning

by Deathcanwait   Mar 18, 2008


Counting the cracks in pavements
Excuses of transparency
A heavy chin rests on aching chest
So young to think of mortality
A walking soaked in anger
A cry like a piercing knife
Lost in thinking of her unthinking
Is living like this a proper life?
Like a child at a grave's side
Dont understand whats going on
But a mind so deep and not unworldly
What is said cant be undone
Once saw an old tree in a silhouette
So unnerving yet at peace
Darkness covers up its hard face
But every darkness soon must cease
Because for me its forever morning
Cant hide in shade to make it through
Left to walk these shattered pavements
My heart this highway, this road, without you

M.H.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Cate Rock

    I love this. It leaves much room for the reader to fill! It shows a lot of character in itself. It deserved my 5! ;) keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    This is pretty good =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarahxbaby

    This is really good. I love the wording of it. Great write and keep it up. ^-^

  • 16 years ago

    by Norman John Henry Campbell

    This is an awesome poem who ever left u well... I can see how they hurt you keep going loving it....

    Love this bit
    Darkness covers up its hard face
    But every darkness soon must cease
    Because for me its forever morning

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Excellent write..

    Lost in thinking of her unthinking
    ..
    Like a child at a grave's side
    Dont understand whats going on
    ..
    Darkness covers up its hard face
    But every darkness soon must cease
    Because for me its forever morning
    ..
    Left to walk these shattered pavements
    My heart this highway, this road, without you

    ur choice and use of words and the comparisons are amazing... loved it..

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