Merciless Heart

by FridusBlueheaven   Mar 19, 2008


Title : Merciless Heart
Written By : Fridus Blueheaven

Merciless heart, knife of a bloody soul inside
Hefty sum of love, but don't know what to decide
Hundred times I've tried then it back to the same side
I know I can run for more, but I know that I can't hide

Merciless heart, I know I've been so wrong lately
And it is no wonder that everyone blame it on me
You know that I've tried so hard dealing with possibility
But in the end, I realize maybe I'm just one trick pony

Merciless heart, I've been trying to be angel for so long
But demonic heart is always there, anywhere I belong
I've tried to be good, but then got everything ended wrong
Damn, maybe I should admit that I wasn't that really strong

Merciless heart, probably once is more than enough for you
But even twice won't get me finding the right point of view
Three times and I'm still the one who couldn't make it true
I've got too many dreams but chances I've had is just a few

Merciless heart, all my dreams are ruined day after day
The word has been spoken then they're wasted in the ashtray
I don't mind trying once more but I can't find the right way
Always pretend that I'm that great but in fact I'm not okay

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  • 17 years ago

    by Keath

    The poem is okay over all but it contains a lot of grammar mistakes which don’t do any good to the poem. Try to correct them.
    I really like the first stanza, it's the best. Again you've made some real strong expressions so that's great. (:

  • 17 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I really likeyour style this poem would make great song lyrics also

  • 17 years ago

    by Blissful

    The last line was filled with such emotion and the whole poem reflecting strength and power. The title really captured my eye so I was eager to read more and the poem just fit everything flawlessly. The flow was great and nothing seemed forced while the imagery just blew me away and completed the poem for me. Well done *5/5*

  • 17 years ago

    by sweet escape

    Great job.so far this is the one i like the most. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by noha

    Nice one , u did hard work, nice feeling 5 /5

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