Comments : Not another poem

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Haha, I always love poems about poems. It so ironic. I agree though, there are a lot of corny poems out there.

    So the love poems gotta stop

    ^^ I sooo agree with that. I hate love poems. >.> There just the same ol' thing. It gets a little redundent. Haha.

    So the love poems gotta stop
    The adventures must end
    And the terrible fears
    And the corny helping hands

    ^^ That's the only stanza that threw off the rhyme. "end" and "hands" don't really rhyme. >.>

    I really like the flow, ans rhymes except for the one I pointed out. Great poem. :]

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    I loved this poem. It was kinda.. out there but it was effective. The flow was good, the word usage was amazing, and I really appreciated the concept.

    "Someone falls for her
    Or someone cheats on him
    Both lovers find out the truth
    Neither of them win"

    ^^ That was just awesome. Hands down one of the best parts of a poem I have ever read. It really shows your personality....

    This was a very good poem... Great write! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by 888Trinity888

    You are really good! I would never have guessed you are only 11. Nice work

  • 16 years ago

    by sweet escape

    I really like this poem. it is a little hypocritical and it also make fun of all the poems out there.

    it is not deep with emotion like most but it does surve a prupose and have meaning to it.

    it is a great read and there is nothing bad to say about it. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    So true. It seems as if everything is about someone breaking up with someone else, or something along that line.

    As for the poem.. Great wording, loved the rhyme.. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Fantastic! It explains poets and all types of poetry very well. I also can't live with out poetry either. Poems are like my breath. I simply can't live without it.

  • 16 years ago

    by ashley joy

    I loved it ! it had truth and deepness to it and it was really cool

  • 16 years ago

    by Amorita Maharaj

    Brilliant Piece :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Natalie

    This poem is extremely sweet! I loved it! Keep the good work up!

    Natalie

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very unique twist in this cute poem
    I can relate
    and I would not change a thing

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Such a unique piece but I think it's more humore than misc lol :) it made me giggle. Well done. 5/5 Em x