WHATEVER
by Lu Mar 24, 2008
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Life is not unfair, people are. we live in a world today dominated by favourism. If I like you I will let your mistake go by. Kinda like my father and my sister. He claims that she is not the favorite but she is. It was when he crushed my dreams when I said them and supported hers even though they were the same. Point is proven life is not unfair, people are. Different branches of people come together to form an extensive tree called population, but so what if we live alone? At least there will be no pain or sorrow to deal with yet no love nor happiness to come.WE WOULD BE NUMB. |
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15 years ago
by MissMana
I like it this way..you could try something different with it but dont delete this one...ITS Friggin true...so true its scary...im on my own branch...building my own numb tree lol...anyways i was reading my private messages and decided to look what you have been writing lately i havent been on here for ever...anyways keep your head up and keeping smiling!
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15 years ago
by MissMana
I like it this way..you could try something different with it but dont delete this one...ITS Friggin true...so true its scary...im on my own branch...building my own numb tree lol...anyways i was reading my private messages and decided to look what you have been writing lately i havent been on here for ever...anyways keep your head up and keeping smiling!
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16 years ago
by Not Enough
I like it the way it is actually.
It is really true!
Great JOB -
16 years ago
All I really get from this is a sense of impotent anger. I bet, on reflection, that you could structure this in a traditional poetic form and come up with something rather more exhilarating while maintaining the clear strength of emotion.
