My very first poem ever

by Poseur   Mar 27, 2008


Secluded from the world,
i hear silence in a world of sound.
saw darkness when there was light.
lived a dream instead of reality.
blocked off from the world,
i am trapped in my mind,
desperate for love, loyalty, and life.
dont take gifts for granted,
dont talk when you should learn.
in this present darkness that
consums our mind, we feed off evil.
open up a locked door,
let the light shine in.
seek truth in a world of deceite,
be the predator, not the prey.
go after what matters to you,
dont give it up without a fight.
live without fear, and in the
final times of life, defeat evil once
in for all. remember what matters most.
live to die, and die to live.

written by tory--4/28/07

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cale

    Really good for your first poem!!! Great start and great poem 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Andy

    Really really really good poem for your first!
    5/5 :)